Of all the burrows in all the riverbanks in all the world, she had come to his.


Another quick flash on Commaful

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A self-indulgence  – I enjoy playing with layout and pictures for these.

This story was another challenge from our writing group – all explained in a comment at the end of the story. Click on the top line or here for the link.


Don’t forget

…to let me know in the comments if you want me to tackle any thorny issues of grammar or punctuation.

I can’t guarantee I’ll know the answers – I probably don’t – but I’ll bring together what I discover and try to make it memorable.

And if I don’t understand either – I’ll say so.




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